NEW POEM(READ PLEASE)

**leoncross** · Subject: Re: NEW POEM(READ PLEASE) Thu Oct 09, 2008 10:42 pm

seriously guys tell the truth do you like it.)that last one sucked(

**Phoenix Dahana** · Subject: Re: NEW POEM(READ PLEASE) Fri Oct 10, 2008 2:10 am

The last one was good in my opinion ^^ Don't sell yourself short lol

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**leoncross** · Subject: Re: NEW POEM(READ PLEASE) Fri Oct 10, 2008 10:03 am

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http://www.playlist.com/user/9706440/view < wicked music

you must be lying.i know now that your not trying.
the world collapses. my memory relapses.
with the rain only pain can follow
the unforgivable sorrow that tomorrow has in store for me.
now i see i am no longer me. only a tortured soul for eternity.
NOW CHEER IT TO THE SKIES I HOPE YOULL REALIZE ISEE THE PAIN IN YOUR EYES!
no matter how many tries i make i can only take never give.
the unforgiven will be rearisen.

**leoncross** · Subject: Re: NEW POEM(READ PLEASE) Sat Oct 11, 2008 2:17 pm

yeah whatev

http://www.playlist.com/user/9706440/view < wicked music

you must be lying.i know now that your not trying.
the world collapses. my memory relapses.
with the rain only pain can follow
the unforgivable sorrow that tomorrow has in store for me.
now i see i am no longer me. only a tortured soul for eternity.
NOW CHEER IT TO THE SKIES I HOPE YOULL REALIZE ISEE THE PAIN IN YOUR EYES!
no matter how many tries i make i can only take never give.
the unforgiven will be rearisen.